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Hmm, mos menoni qe alterlife-i o ka e qet ni poezi t'veten :P ... alterlife-i ska lidhje me poezi... poezia ma posht osht e S@r@h_ ;m'ka pelqy e thash ta qes n'emer t'saj. shpresoj qe ju pelqen edhe jyve qysh mka pelqy mu :D


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Dielli buzqesh ne qiellin e kaltert
jam duke shikuar lart ne qiell jam
e shtrirur ne nje vend perplot lule
me ze nje gjum i thell largohem
larg qe nuk mund te kthehm...
zgjohem ne enderr me lulet
mbi mua ndjej nje ze nje frymarje
ne veshin tim ngrihem ashtu
me Bene te ndihem e dashuruar
ndjej diqka qe nuk mund te pershkruaj
me Bente si te isha ne qiell
ndjeja dashuri ....
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nje buze ne qafen time
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ula koken
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Nga Duart E Mia....
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Post by Honey »

sara m'ke shoku :O

por nese me lejon te theme nje kritik e vogel, e dashur fillimi pak e dobet ne krehasim me fundin i cili ke shume i mire (K)

perfundimi : very nice job ;)
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thx :$ loqk flm alterlife flm loqk qe e ke psotu poezin :D
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Je ka me Befason e hajd qe sa skom shkru aj nid Mutivejshen lajk ju!
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A Po Do te Huazoj diqka veresi tjap :shsmile:
Rethanat e bojn tveten ! :wink:
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s@r@h_ wrote:A Po Do te Huazoj diqka veresi tjap :shsmile:
Rethanat e bojn tveten ! :wink:
Gjithsesi!
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Honey wrote:sara m'ke shoku :O

por nese me lejon te theme nje kritik e vogel, e dashur fillimi pak e dobet ne krehasim me fundin i cili ke shume i mire (K)

perfundimi : very nice job ;)


edhe mu fundi me pelqej shumeee :)
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Honey wrote:sara m'ke shoku :O

por nese me lejon te theme nje kritik e vogel, e dashur fillimi pak e dobet ne krehasim me fundin i cili ke shume i mire (K)

perfundimi : very nice job ;)


Po Gjithnje une ja filloj piT keqes e perfundoj me te mire :P e vertet qe njeri shkon tu u permisu
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Post by s@r@h_ »

krenaruus wrote:
Honey wrote:sara m'ke shoku :O

por nese me lejon te theme nje kritik e vogel, e dashur fillimi pak e dobet ne krehasim me fundin i cili ke shume i mire (K)

perfundimi : very nice job ;)


edhe mu fundi me pelqej shumeee :)


Gjithmon mundohem me bere ni perfudim Shokus ndonje here e Artiti Qellimin
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Valla s@r@h_
Tu ka Rrit Firma Oooooo baccccc Obaccc
Antart tjer po ti posetojn Poezit ke Perparu para te ardhmes :o
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haha eedhe ne adnerr do po shofin pozi qaq qe po perparaojn
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Post by s@r@h_ »

berati_rock wrote:haha eedhe ne adnerr do po shofin pozi qaq qe po perparaojn


ty ty edhe ngjkondrra spot shoh e lejemo ne ondrra


:evil:
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Lani wrote:Valla s@r@h_
Tu ka Rrit Firma Oooooo baccccc Obaccc
Antart tjer po ti posetojn Poezit ke Perparu para te ardhmes :o



Lani tkom lut me ta postu une ty njo po ske dasht qyhhh 8)
kshtu qe i ka pelqy asaj !!!
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Qikjo poezi mpelqen mas shumti :oops:
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Post by SPIRIT OF DEATH »

.......
pres dikon qe e dua por nuk e njo...
shum teper perfundim i mir ... em kujtoj diqka s llidhun me qita rreshta :shsmile:
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